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  1. Write about what you know about. - because you can make those worlds feel REAL to the reader. I would start with whichever you know most about.
  2. An outline sometimes helps to clarify what my story is going to be about.
  3. Beginning, middle and end. All three parts are REALLY important.
    • In the beginning you introduce the characters and a start of the story idea.
    • In the middle you have the main story, what the characters actually get up to.
    • In the end you must have a good ending so that the reader isn't left thinking "yeah, so what happened next?" or "why did they do that?"
  4. Help the reader care about your character.
  5. Focus on one main character who has a problem, then let the character work on the problem. The character does not need to solve the problem, but her or she (or it) should work on it.
  6. It is better if the main character learns something by the end of the story.
  7. Ask yourself a lot of "what if?" questions.
  8. Readers often feel as if they are the main character so you want to take care of your main character.
  9. Remember this: How many other things in life can you build, then knock down if you want, and rebuild another way, just to see which way you like it best?

  1. The parts of your story:
    • Every good story starts with a hook, that is usually a problem or a mystery that draws the reader in.
    • The middle of the story helps the reader get to know the main character better as the plot (or what is happening in the story) unfolds.
    • The end of the story solves the problem or the mystery. It makes the reader feel satisfied. The end is also called the conclusion.
  2. Every good story has 3 Cs. A good main CHARACTER, a CONFLICT or a problem, and a CONCLUSION. That's where your problem gets solved.
  3. When you have extra words in your story - If you think about how you would tell this story to a friend, and write it down just like that, it will help make the extra words disappear.
  4. When we are writing stories it is important to keep writing and not to let spelling worry us.
  5. It is important to exercise our "writer's muscle" because this will help us to become better writers.
  6. Put yourself inside the mind and thoughts of the main character. What would he or she do or think?
  7. Remember to solve the problem by the end of your story!
  8. Whatever you do, remember to make your story fun to write.
  9. Writers use something called Transition Lines to move around in the story. Some examples of transition lines:
    A little while later...
    That evening...
    After lunch...
    She found me...
    The next day....


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