"...I will look forward to seeing your next draft. I know it's going to be great! Happy writing and I hope these suggestions are helpful." -Sarah
"...Good for you for making such a good plan for the beginning, middle and end of your story. Thats a very important thing to start off with. Now comes the really fun part breathing life into your characters and making the whole thing come alive. I know you can do it! I look forward to seeing the next version of your story." -Sarah
"...Writing can be so much fun! I let the characters in my stories do all the things I wish I could do, but I can not. And while I am writing, it feels like I am actually getting to do those fun things. That is how writing should be. Fun! I can't wait to read what you will write! Happy writing!" Lois Szymanski.
"...I am already wondering so many things about your story and what you will share! Let me know as soon as you decide what your story will be about. I am excited about reading a true horse story about your mom and written by you! Good luck with your first draft!" Your Friend, Lois Szymanski